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"But I was single at the time, and didn't even have any FWBs. So I asked the City for good luck, and to send me someone nice, and I put the top down even though the temperature wasn't *that* warm, and I started cruising around the Mission, looking for someone who was up for a good time. 2/5

"I think it was... Mission and 20th? Yeah, that's right, I was pulled up at the stop light behind a bunch of other cars, and this dude was in front of Doc's Clock. I could see him giving me the eye — or maybe it was the car, but..." They shrug. "I told him, 'Hey, you want a good time?' He smiled and sauntered over to the passenger door. 3/5

"So I took him a few streets away, to San Jose Avenue, right by where my family lived when I was little, and there's hardly any foot traffic, and found a place to pull it over and get in the back. And put the top up, of course.

"He was pretty good, and I'll just say we gave the shocks a good workout." They pause and smile. "Then when we were done, I kissed him goodbye and told him thank-you, and left him there. He still had a smile when I drove away. 4/5

"I think I maybe saw him at a club about a year and a half later. But he was far away and the lighting was bad. And there was no way I was going to go and check. It was a one-time thing, and it was just the way it should be." 5/5

#WordWeavers Day 4: Describe a cozy memory one of your MCs has. What are the sounds, sights, smells & other sensations in it?

I just wrote this spontaneously, in response to this prompt:

#WordWeavers Day 5: Antagonist POV: What are your core values?

Van Martinez says: "'Safety with respect for all.' The force's¹ unofficial motto. But you know what? I also go by its, and the City's, official motto: 'Oro en paz, fierro en guerra.'²"

1. She means the San Francisco police force; she's a career officer

2. "Gold in peace, iron in war"

#WordWeavers Day 6: Do your characters do any spiritual practices?

There's a sense in which the City magic that my MCs routinely do also counts as a spiritual practice, and some of the non-main folks also have some spiritual practices in their magic.

Aside from that, Carlos goes to Catholic mass most Sundays.

#WordWeavers Day 7: Do your MCs’ values align with the traditions and values of the communities they come from?

To the extent that all of them, to some degree, come from San Francisco, yes. They're definitely examples of "San Francisco values" — and I mean that in the best way possible!

#WordWeavers Day 8: SC POV: Who knows your deepest secrets?

Zoë Broadstreet says: Nobody. That's why they're secret. Really, you should know better than to ask that of a lady who works in infosec!

Carmen Lockhart: (looks thoughtful) I'm not sure I really have any secrets. I'm publicly out as autistic, so that's no secret. I don't really care if anyone knows I'm bi and demi. Yeah, I guess I don't have any.

#WordWeavers Day 9: If your antagonists were animals, which one would they each be?

Adrian Hardesty: Something like a mink, leopard, or jaguar that looks very pretty, but is extremely dangerous and kills just for the fun of it.

Derrick Devereaux: A peacock

Donna Kuang: I'm not sure. Something intelligent and with at least a little elegance, and not a major predator.

Van Martinez: A wolf

Travis Winter: Very likely a lion, stereotypical as it is. Commanding, and also good-looking and stylish.

#WordWeavers Day 10: If your MCs were animals, which ones?

Angel: Maybe a quetzal?

Carlos Velázquez: A raven. Oh, so very much a raven.

David: It's not enough to just say, "a dog"; there's too much variability there. David would particularly be some breed known for its intelligence, kindness, and loyalty.

Jessie: I really don't want to say a cat, but it may actually fit.

Margot: She was born in the year of the Fire Tiger, and she's very at-home with that association.

#WordWeavers Day 11: What emotions did your characters experience in the last scene you wrote?

The last scene I wrote was a vignette depicting a standard, regular meeting of a group that tries to use magic to help people. Nobody was feeling any particularly strong emotions; they were just handling regular business. A couple of folks were glad to see each other, and bummed that they couldn't hang out more.

#WordWeavers Day 13: You just got a legit movie offer for your book. What do you do first?

Get an entertainment lawyer to draft me up a contract that will keep them from changing certain things. Yes, I know movies are a completely different storytelling medium from writing, and lots of things will *have to* change — but they don't get to turn any of my POC white, my queer folks straight, my enbies binary, or introduce any good cops or other copaganda. That's *not* necessary.

Edit: Also... 1/2

...note this excellent answer about having and agent. For me, I guess that'd be thing #2, but they'd be kind of neck-and-neck.

https://eldritch.cafe/@sfwrtr/113474408406899244

2/2

#WordWeavers Day 14: Were there any other names you considered for your MCs?

Absolutely. I went through a bunch of options for Angel Castillo, including "Alas" (stress on the first syllable, the Spanish word for "wings"). Jessie Nakamura could've been a Jenny, but that name suggests someone older. Then she was nearly a Julie, but I wanted to avoid being too close to Julie Mao of _The Expanse_. 1/2

David and Carlos, OTOH, have always had those names, and Margot never had any other one except for "David's mentor" (much like Angel was originally "Jessie's mentor" before I started messing around with names like Alas). 2/2

#WordWeavers Day 15: How would your story change if you had to use another MC?

I can't understand why I'd have to?

@kagan For real. "You're gonna change your protagonist, see, or else things are going to get a li-ttle bit hot for your dear old mum, and you wouldn't want that to happen, now would you!"

@asakiyume I know, right? I was thinking, like, "What, will the writing police come and tell me I have to change my MCs? No, wait, what if the MC store is all sold out of stylish Latine enbies and fat Chinese-American kung fu mommies?"

#WordWeavers Day 17: Who are your MCs most grateful for?

Margot: her husband, Al
Angel: her best friend, Margot
Jessie: her older brother, George
Carlos: his BFF, Miguel
David: he's really not sure

#WordWeavers Day 18: Who are your antagonists most grateful for?

Derrick Devereaux: his husband, Austin

Donna Kuang: her husband, Larry

Travis Winter: Honestly, his executive assistant, Kayla Rodgers. His wife, Holly, is awesome, but Travis would be lost without Kayla.

Van Martinez: not anyone, really

Adrian Hardesty: Doesn't actually understand the question, but if asked in public, he'd say his beautiful wife, Crystal and darling son, Ben.

#WordWeavers Day 19: Were there any other inciting incidents for your MCs that you considered?

The structure of this story has multiple inciting incidents; effectively there are three:

Jessie's magical awakening;
David's magical awakening; and
the realization by Jessie and David's mentors and a few other experienced magicians that another magician has transgressed the usual bounds of morality and concocted an evil plan.

1/2

I'm still working out some details of exactly how that third inciting incident happens, in ways that have felt a bit like "a change" in it (like, I thought they found out X but it turns out they found out Y instead), but the high-level incident, in the terms I just put forth in the last sentence? Yeah, that's stayed basically the same. 2/2

#WordWeavers Day 20: Your MC can only take one thing on a trip. What would that be?

They're modern people in their twenties and thirties; I think pretty much all of them would say "My phone", and then ask if the charging cable counts as a second thing or if it's included, because otherwise there's going to be a problem.

#WordWeavers Day 21: Would your MCs be good or bad upstairs neighbors?

They'd pretty much all be good upstairs neighbors; one thing they all have in common is being habitually polite and respectful of other people. This is no coincidence; it's something that puts them fundamentally at odds with my villains.

#WordWeavers Day 22: Would your antagonists be good or bad upstairs neighbors?

Most of them actually *are* upstairs neighbors, in at least one residence (and sometimes more). They manage not to be particularly bad ones mostly by dint of living in situations where they don't really come in contact with their downstairs neighbors much (e.g., modern buildings that have good soundproofing, the general isolation strategies of urban people, etc.).

#WordWeavers Day 23: What comforts your antagonists?

Travis and Adrian: Fine food and drink. For Adrian, also hot sex.

Donna and Derrick: Their husband's love and support. For Derrick, also the support of his circle of friends.

For all of them, in varying degrees and ways: Getting what they want, and succeeding, and knowing for sure that they are making the world and the City a better place.

#WordWeavers Day 24: Which two of the five senses do you describe most in your book?

To be really sure, I'd want to go through my work so far and count up instances of sensory words or descriptions. That would take quite a while, though.

I'm fairly confident that the answer would turn out to be sight and sound, with tactile sensation running a close third.

[Addendum: Shout-out to everyone pointing out, correctly, that we have more than 5 senses!]

#WordWeavers Day 25: What part of your antagonists’ personalities makes them so antagonistic?

Their beliefs that they are right, and that they know better than other people.

#WordWeavers Day 26: Could you see your characters fitting into anyone else’s book world?

Aside from the anachronism, they could slide into the pages of Armistead Maupin's _Tales of the City_ with a blend so seamless, it'd look purposeful.

They might also be able to integrate into works of modern urban fantasy that don't have a major world-shifting event (e.g., maybe Harry Dresden, but not the Hollows). Might. Not sure if the changes in magic would be too much. 1/2

Also, of course, even if they were in Harry Dresden's world, they'd still be in San Francisco, not Chicago. It'd be easier to move them across the world-lines than to a different City. But if Harry ever went to visit San Francisco, he could maybe bump into my folks... maybe?

N.B.: I've only read the first Dresden book, so I'm pretty iffy on all that. 2/2

#WordWeavers Day 27: Describe one of your characters from the point of view of another character.

This is actually going to happen a lot in the book proper, starting from about page 2 or so when Jessie's mentor, Angel, shows up. And then there'll be times when, frex, David's the viewpoint character and first meets Jessie...

I don't really feel like writing something that's potentially actual book text right now, so here's Angel Castillo's (close 3rd) POV description of their best friend:

#WordWeavers Day 28: Your MC made a bad joke. What was it about?

Margot: Most of Margot's jokes are good ones. But if it were a bad one (as per the prompt), she probably did a really morbid one.

Angel: I think they kind of like dad jokes, actually.

Carlos: Actually *is a dad*. And cannot resist the siren call of dad jokes. (He also tells good jokes.)

Jessie: Probably something very self-deprecating.

David: Something really nerdy, like either programmer humor or a science joke.